January 2022
Myles has been chosen as star writer because he has applied all the skills we have learnt this half term in this piece of writing. I like how he has used commas in a list, adverbs with the '-ly' suffix and some conjunctions. He has even remembered to use capital letters for proper nouns.
Well done, Myles!
February 2022
Myles's stamina for writing is fantastic! He is now producing several pages of writing at a time! I was pleased that Myles used some conjunctions to make his sentences longer, and he included some adverbs with '-ly' suffix.
Well done, Myles!